Written for younger readers but not dumbed down! |
Some editors, artists and writers
in the Comic book Industry believe that writing for kids means writing material
that’s dumbed down. Stuff like Scooby-Doo comic books and Manga.
But that’s not the case at all.
I’ve been writing Independent Reader and Young Adult
fiction for the past three years. And the subject matter I’ve tackled in my
work is anything but dumbed down.
I’ve tackled topics like
masturbation, and feminine hygiene in The Thetas and All About Nikki Season- The Sensational second Season. I’ve written about body image in Isis series
stories like Isis: The Beauty Myth. I’ve written about I’ve explored the world fine Art modeling in
Isis: All About the Goddess.
And younger readers have read all
this content with no problems. Tween and teen boys and girls men and women of all
ages all over the world have enjoyed my stories.
All demographics of audiences the
comic book industry desperately needs to pull it out of a two decade slump.
I didn’t talk down to my readers
in my stories. I didn’t patronize readers by dumbing down the subject matter or
the characters.
Too many in the American comic
book industry treat children like they’re dumb. Like all they want to read is
Scooby Doo or Manga.
I wrote content in such a way that the reader could comprehend the subject matter. That didn't mean I dumbed things down. That meant tailoring the content in such a way that it was appropriate for the audience of tweens and teens I was targeting.
Too many people working in the comic book
industry treat younger readers like they’re dumb. Like all they want to read is Scooby
Doo or Manga. Or allegedly child oriented comics like Archie or Johnny DC.
Here’s a News Flash: small children, tweens, and teens are SMART. If
they’re passionate about a subject or a character they can read between the
lines of the story and understand literary elements just like adults. All a
publisher has to do is get them excited about reading.
And from what I’ve seen, they can
handle content that features complex subject matter. It just has to be written in a way that’s age
appropriate.
Comic book writers don’t have to write down to
younger readers. In fact they’ll see right through that kind of content.
Kids read this story and got it! I used a lot of big words and complex terms but Kids understood it |
A good writer knows how to scale
their content so it’s tailored to fit the audience of readers they’re trying to
target. For example, in my Isis series books and All About Nikki screenplay books
I often tackle topics subject matter like sex and body image. But I make it a
point to NEVER talk down to the reader. The way I figure it, the reader will be
smart enough to put two and two together. When these topics are presented to
the reader in a tasteful manner that’s explains things clearly, the reader will
walk away learning a bit more about the subject than they did before they read
my work.
What younger readers can’t handle
is subject matter that’s obscenely inappropriate or just plain excessively
violent like today’s comic books.
Younger readers can handle superheroes
punching bad guys in the face or someone being knocked out. They can handle
seeing a nude body in the context of a medical examination or a bath. They can
handle hearing two characters talking about sex and sexuality or even showing
characters having a romantic relationship.
They can even handle death.
What is inappropriate for younger
readers is seeing comic panels of someone being eviscerated, decapitated, or mutilated. Seeing two characters having graphic sex in
panels. Seeing graphic pictures of rape and sexual assault. Seeing panels
featuring depraved acts like cannibalism. Hearing characters like superheroes
using hard profanity like F-Bombs. Seeing “good” characters like superheroes
commit murders and have no sense of morals in their lives or in the lives of
their secret identities.
Enjoyed by readers of all ages! (Well, 11 and up) |
It’s content like this that alienates
audiences like tweens and teens. It’s what turns away women and girls. All of
these audiences buy lots of Young Adult fiction which features similar content
to comic books. The Young Adult market that currently buys Monster High, Twilight,
Harry Potter, and The Hunger Games could be the next big market for the comic
book industry if editors in the comic book industry made serious efforts to
capitalize on those demographics with quality content presented in the
appropriate context.
When it comes to content, many in
the comic book industry don’t understand it’s not content, but context. In the
proper context almost any subject matter can be presented to younger readers. If
a creative team handles content in a sensitive and tasteful way they can reach
an entirely new generation of readers and introduce them to the comic book
medium.
As a writer who has written
stories dealing with complex social issues, I know that the best ideas can fall
apart due to poor execution. And when a creative team thinks that an idea is
childish it’s because they’re not coming at it from the right perspective.
Writing for younger readers does not mean writing in a dumbed down way. It
means getting creative and finding a way to reach your intended audience with
content that appeals to them.
I can remember an anecdote on some website where a fellow decides to give a kid a copy of the New 52 Flash book but the kid didn't like it for being boring. (That in the New 52 Flash stories, Barry's dating his colleague and there's a character called Manuel Lago who got experimented on and mutilates himself to produce clones.) I can also remember some readers getting upset over a much nastier Bart in one recent Flash story (I can remember the comments where one reader suggested that since one of them was using too much exposition, the solution could've been to simply send themselves back to where they come from and with the character of Bart saying "loser"), that Flash stories do have a habit of franchising its character too much (because entirely original characters are difficult to write about) and there were some people who felt that there were plot holes in these stories (one story line focused too much on the character getting torture and the like). While I can't remember the reasons why that kid found the Flash boring but it says a lot about the writing.
ReplyDeleteAd, this New 52 flash sounds sick and twisted. Nothing like the Wally West stories I read as a teenager.
ReplyDeleteMutilating yourself to produce clones? Why can't we get a story about bank robberies or something like that? Comics today are too mean, too angry and too excessively violent. It's a sign to me that the writers aren't very good. When you have to resort to goore, blood and violence to shock the reader, it's clear the writers know nothing about storytelling.