In comic books science fiction, and fantasy fiction, there
seem to be two different Character transformation arcs for men and women.
In the story arc for male heroes, the character goes on a
journey where they go through a learning process in a character transformation
arc. In that story arc, they have a clearly defined mission. We learn who that
character is, what they want, and the obstacles they face along the way in that
journey to learning how to be a hero, overcoming their personal fears, accomplishing
their goals, and defeating the enemy they face.
Heroines on the other hand don’t usually go through this
process. In most cases they just show up in a costume and start fighting bad
guys. In some cases they get a tacked on origin and next to no character
development in their stories. In old comics like Ms. Marvel and Claws of the
Cat, the heroine just shows up and takes on bad guys with no real understanding
of their powers and abilities, and no real mission or direction after they
defeat the first bad guy.
So there’s no real reason for the audience to care about
them outside of their skimpy costume.
Because they have no character transformation arc to
establish who they are, and the series of obstacles they face in their journey,
stories featuring heroines are oftentimes a hollow and shallow experince. When
it comes to heroines it seems like writers don’t like putting female characters
through the same hardships male characters go through.
For example Rey in Star Wars Episode 7 didn’t go through a
tenth of the stuff Luke Skywalker went through in Episodes 4-6. In the original
Star Wars trilogy viewers saw Luke go from humble farm boy aspiring to be a
rebel to a Jedi in Return of the Jedi. And in that character transformtion arc over
three movies, we saw Luke go through lots of hardship and adversity in his
quest to become a Jedi. He saw his uncle and aunt murdered. He lost his mentor
Ben. He saw Biggs Darklighter, his friend from Tattoine die in the Death Star
raid. He saw Han in carbonite. He lost his hand. He had to deal with the
revelation of the enemy he was trying to destroy, Darth Vader as his father. He
put his life on the line standing for his beliefs confronting the Emporor.
Rey, on the other hand is capable of understanding the
force, able to pilot the Millenium falcon and can weild lightsabers in one
movie. Stuff that took Luke Skywalker THREE movies to learn and master in his
character transformation arc, she could do all with no real training. Because
the audience never saw her go through any hardships at what was supposed to be
the start of her character transformation arc, the audience really couldn’t
relate to her or identify with her the same way they did with Luke.
When heroes go
through a character transformation arc they provide the reader with a richer
experience. The audience relates to the hero and their problems. They put
themselves in their shoes. And as they see them learning and growing in their
journeys they grow too.
Why don’t writers like putting heroines through real
character transformation arcs? Is it a fear of being called misogynistic? Is it
a fear of being called a sexist? The minute a writer like myself starts showing
a heroine going through hardships in a story designed to start building their
character and resolve, the feminists come out and shame them calling them a
misogynist.
But if male and female heroes are supposed to be equal, shouldn’t
they go through the same character transformation process? Wouldn’t women going
through hardships make them richer and more multidimensional? Wouldn’t
audiences be able to relate to them and identify with their struggles? Wouldn’t
that provide the audience with a richer and more entertaining story?
When I write heroines I’m not afraid to put them through the
same character transformation process that the guys through. Regardless of the
genre, characters like Isis, E’steem, Cassandra Lee, Nikki Desmond, Colleen
Anderson and Matilda Crowley get put through their paces on their journey to
becoming heroines in my stories. They get beat up, they get humiliated, they go
through pain and suffer loss. At the end of the story readers learn to respect
those heroines because they’ve gone through the changes in that character
transformation arc that have established the content of their character.
I understand what makes a heroine strong isn’t her super
powers. It’s the strength of character to stand up for what they believe in no
matter what they’re going through. That kind of resolve is built through a
character transformation arc where a character has to overcome a series of
obstacles that change them from who they were into the heroine that they become.
In the realm of comics, sci-fi, and fantasy oftentimes
writers treat their heroines like Mary Sues instead of fully actualized
characters. And when they do this they cheat the audience out of a great story.
Heroines deserve to full character transformation arcs just like the guys, and creators
have to get the courage let their heroines break a few nails so they can build
a stronger backbone.
To be fair, some of your female characters seem very idealised to me like they tend to have the same body type that's often commented by other characters. Like as if you have some female ideal.
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As far as Star Wars, it's a rush for a cash grab. They want to have a competent Jedi duo vs an army of evillegal Sith by the second movie, so they wave the magic wand on Rey. What is worse is the implications of Luke being both her father and a deadbeat daddy who didn't know he had a daughter, likely for contrived stupid reasons. Trust me, fictional franchises don't tend to go into complicated or risky territory, so Rey is likely Luke's daughter given that the Lightsaber just chooses her over his Luke's nephew because he is more closely related as her father, plus the pattern of Anakin to Luke is already father to son, and the focus of the movies is already all about the Skywalkers family as the focus.
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