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Monday, June 27, 2016
War Machine Is A LAME Character
I’m a big Jim
Rhodes fan. He’s one of my favorite comic characters in the Marvel Universe.
When I saw him in the original David Micheline/JRJR/Bob Layton comics in my
Brother’s comic collection as a kid I became an Iron Man fan for life.
But I’m gonna go on
record saying War Machine is a LAME character.
Yeah, I love the
War Machine Armor. When I first saw it in Iron Man #282 it was a badass looking
design. With it’s black and silver it looked like Iron man was ready to kick
someone’s ass.
But when you take
another look at War Machine from a creative standpoint as a character separate
from Iron Man it’s a hollow concept.
Basically War
Machine is just an Iron Man suit painted black and silver with a bunch of guns
bolted to it. That’s cool in theory. Until you realize that the Iron Man suit
features some of the most advanced weapons in the Marvel Universe. So the guns
are kind of redundant.
Seriously, what
does Iron Man need with guns on his arms when he has repulsor rays that can
shatter mountains? Why does Iron Man need shoulder mounted mini missiles to
damage something when he has pulse bolts that can demolish a building in
seconds? And what can a Gatling gun on your shoulder do that a Uni-beam or a
finger laser can’t?
Just seems stupid
when you think about it. Especially when you realize that Iron Man suits are
invulnerable, are strong enough to knock out the Hulk and have advanced
targeting computers.
Yeah, guns, guns
guns. That flash and go boom, but they have no substance when it’s time to
write a story.
The only thing
LAMER than War Machine is Simon Baz’s gun. Seriously, you have the most
powerful weapon in the universe and you still want to carry a piece? I thought the
standard for becoming a Green Lantern was being completely honest and totally
fearless. Baz just looks like a fraidy cat holding that nine millimeter
security blanket instead of wielding that power ring like a boss.
Anyway, What really
makes War Machine LAME is the fact that Jim Rhodes proved to the world he had
what it took to be Iron Man during Tony Stark’s second fall off the wagon in
the 1980s. Of course he couldn’t fix anything, but he knew his way around the operating
systems well enough to fight in the original Secret Wars.
And the Silver
Centurion armor was originally designed for Rhodey to wear, not Tony Stark.
So why give him
this second rate suit featuring a bunch of guns bolted to it? Is it a
consolation prize for not getting the chance to wear the BOSS Silver Centurion
suit back in the 80’s? I mean, War Machine looks COOL from a design standpoint.
But as a concept for a superhero War Machine is just so one dimensional.
Don’t get me wrong,
Rhodey’s a great character. But I always felt his best role was supporting Tony
Stark. As the sidekick he added something to Iron Man stories. A voice of
reason. A best friend. A partner who got him out of a jam with a badguy so he
could suit up. I’m cool with him putting on a suit and helping out in an
emergency or for a run of Iron Man comics.
But Jim Rhodes as
War Machine full time always felt forced. Clumsy. Awkward. I bought the first couple
of issues of the original run of War Machine comics back in the 1990’s and they
were absolutely TERRIBLE. The worst direction the character could have ever taken.
In those solo stories Jim lost his “voice” and went absolutely nowhere. The
character had no mission, no purpose and no substance. It was clear from the
first issue that the writers just didn’t know what to do with him when they had
him armor up.
Rhodey had armor
and an attitude, but he didn’t have any of the elements needed for a compelling
comic story. Rhodey didn’t have Tony’s inventiveness or tech savviness. So he
couldn’t fix an Iron man suit or create a new gadget or specialty weapon like a
proton cannon to save the day. He didn’t have Tony’s battle experience so he
didn’t have a deep roster of bad guys. And he didn’t have Tony’s money so he
couldn’t even buy things like those mini missiles or the bullets for the
Gatling gun on that War Machine suit.
When you boil it
down Jim Rhodes as War machine is basically a guy who owns an Iron man suit
with a bunch of guns attached to it. That gets kind of old. Seriously, how many
stories can you write about a guy flying around in an Iron man suit with guns
on it shooting at things?
Bob Layton, one of
Jim Rhodes’ co-creators said that putting Jim Rhodes in an Iron Man suit was a
mistake years ago. And I agree with him. Just like Superman needs civilians
like Lois Lane and Jimmy Olsen to fit into the background of his world to make
him appear powerful, Tony Stark needed Jim Rhodes to be in the background of
Iron Man comics. Civilians play an important role in the supporting cast of a
superhero comic. And sometimes the best characters in a comic are the ones who
aren’t in costume.
Again, I’m a big
Jim Rhodes fan. And I love the War Machine suit. But putting the two together
to make a new superhero just doesn’t work. War Machine is just a guy an Iron Man
suit with a bunch of guns attached to it. And while it has flash, it just
doesn’t have the substance to make it stand on its own from a creative
standpoint. Who needs a guy in an Iron Man suit with a bunch of guns on it to
do what Iron man already does without them?
Friday, June 24, 2016
Stop Putting Comic Creators on Pedestals!
I’ve been watching
a disturbing trend among some comic fans. Where they put put comic book writer
Goeff Johns on a pedestal.
Yes, Goeff Johns
had a great run of issues on the Flash. But so did Bill Messener-Loebs. And so
did Mark Waid.
When fans put
creators on pedestals and deify them, it’s a bad thing. That means they’re not
connecting with the character, but worshipping the creator. And instead of
readers becoming fans of the character they become fans of a creator.
Goeff Johns is not
the end all to be all for comic writing. Yes, he had good runs on DC titles
such as Flash, JSA, and Green Lantern, but he’s made his fair share of mistakes
too like the FlashPoint event and a forgettable run on Marvel’s Avengers. And
he shouldn’t be the barometer other comic writers should be measured by.
Nor should his
version be considered the definitive version of any character. Yes, his stories
are entertaining. They’re compelling. But I do not consider his version of any
DC Character to be the ONLY one.
That’s why I was
irked when I saw the excessive focus on adapting Johns stories on CW’s The
Flash TV show. The adaptation of FlashPoint right after an entire season of Johns
Zoom is a slap in the face to all the creators who contributed to the development
of the character over the last 60 years. If this is a show that’s an adaptation
of The Flash, it should encompass all the creators who contributed to the
characters’ development not just Goeff Johns.
Superheroes have
many creative teams that contribute to their evolution. And their contributions
deserve to be regarded by fans as well. We’re supposed to be reading the comics
for the characters, not the creators.
When comic fans
deify comic creators like Johns, they put unrealistic expectations on them. And
then when they don’t deliver on them in an anticipated run they get upset like
many did with his New 52 run on Justice League.
When they shouldn’t
put them on pedestals in the first place.
Every writer has
good stories and bad stories. It’s part of the business. Readers enjoy the good
ones and they move past the bad ones. It’s nice readers want to be fans of a
particular writer. But their version of a character is not the only one.
I’m a big fan of
the David Micheline/JRJR/Bob Layton version of Iron Man. It’s considered by
many the best run of the character. But I also love the Len Kaminiski/Kevin
Hopgood version of Iron man too. Why? Because Kaminiski’s technopunk Iron man
stories put a fresh perspective on the character and Kevin Hopgood’s unique
armor designs like War Machine, the Neuromimetic telepresence armor and the
modular armor just POPPED off a page and came to life.
And while I’m a fan
of the Denny O’neill/Neal Adams Batman, I also like the Steve Grant/Norm
Breyfogle version of the character. There’s just something distinct and fun to
look at regarding Breyfogle’s Batman and Grant’s stories are just the right mix
of action, mystery and FUN to read.
I don’t put
creative teams on pedestals. In my eyes each creative team and each creator
contributes to the character in their own way. And the character is the main
reason why I’m reading the adventures of a character.
If I buy comics
it’s because I want to read the adventures of Batman, Superman, The Flash,
Captain America, Spider-Man The Hulk or Iron Man. And I want to buy those
comics because the stories are good regardless of whoever is writing or drawing
them.
And if I wrote
comics I’d want readers to enjoy the adventures of the characters not put me on
a pedestal. My goal is to create compelling stories that build an audience with
readers. When it comes to comics, the main attraction in my eyes should be the
characters, not the creator.
Tuesday, June 21, 2016
Flash Season 3- Another Victim of the Berlanti Curse?
Entertainment
weekly announced that season 3 of CW’s The Flash will adapt the critically
panned storyline FlashPoint this season.
Looks like the
Berlanti curse strikes right on time.
Damn. Just Damn.
I knew The Flash
was in trouble starting around the middle of season 2. The Zoom storyline
really meandered for a couple of episodes, and that lackluster finale pretty
much set up this HOT MESS. On seeing his Daddy die emo Barry ran back in time
to save both his parents from death.
Turning what was
once a fun sci-fi superhero show into a time paradox. Every time the writers ran
into a jam this season like the AWFUL Arrow crossover, they just have Barry run
back in time to go find a Deus ex Machina to set things right.
The big problem
with CW’s The Flash these days is that it just runs around in circles. Just
when you think this series is going to build some momentum towards a strong
finish, it goes right back to Barry getting emo over mommy and Daddy and going
back in time to make things right.
With this
adaptation of Reverse Flash in the first season Zoom in the second and now
Flashpoint I have to wonder if this show is going to be The Flash or just the
Goeff Johns show?
Seriously, I’m
really getting tired of seeing John’s fingerprints on The Flash. Goeff Johns
isn’t the only person to write Flash stories. And he wasn’t the greatest Flash
writer of all time. Berlanti and Warner Brothers need to get him off a
pedestal. There are a lot of great writers who contributed to The Flash’s 50
plus year history and I’d like to see their stories adapted to television. Guys
like Mark Waid and Bill Messner-Loebs have told some great Flash stories. Their
contributions to the character deserve some screentime too. Maybe if we saw
their stories adapted onscreen it’d put some balance and perspective on the
character.
And I’d like to see
some more of THE ROGUES. Remember those guys? Captain Cold, Heat Wave, Golden
Glider, Rainbow Raider, Trickster, Gorilla Grodd, and Weather Wizard? The first
season featured Barry running through his rogues gallery in between the quest
to take down the big bad Reverse Flash. Then Zoom popped up and the Rogues
stopped showing up on this show and we got a bunch of Earth 2 jobbers who got
lamer and lamer with every episode.
Seriously, I’m
still waiting for Mirror Master and Top to pop up on this show. It’s a shame
that the Rogues have taken a backseat to all this time travel drivel. And with
FlashPoint taking center stage they’re being pushed to the third row in a show
where they should be center stage. I want to see Barry kicking bad guy ass,
mentoring Wally, and moving on with his life. Not being a Emo SIMP brooding
over his parents deaths and running around in time travel circles. The Real
Barry Allen would be making efforts to honor his family by preventing more
deaths. But this Emo chump spends most of his time being emo over mommy and
daddy or Begging behind Iris Wests’ skirt.
I’d hate to see
what happens to this Barry when he finds out about the final fate of Iris West.
With him being an emotional wimp he’d probably put on a black costume and call
himself the Dark Racer or some shit like that. Seriously, the writers need to
give Barry some BALLS and a resolve. He’s not acting like a hero. He’s acting
like a BITCH.
And it’s getting
tiresome. The Flash used to be a fun show with a great balance of action,
science fiction and adventure with a little comedy thrown in. But all this time
travel crap, and alternate universe nonsense is bogging down what was once a
promising show. All the cool stuff that makes The Flash a fun comic is not
getting put onscreen in the TV show. That’s what made Arrow unwatchable for two
going on three seasons and now that negative energy is starting to race its way
into The Flash. FlashPoint gave us the hot mess that was the New 52 in the
comics and it looks like it’s gonna bog down DC’s TV shows too.
Monday, June 20, 2016
Spellbound Update
COVER IS NOT FINAL! |
Last week I finally
finished the first draft of Spellbound, the Prequel to 2015’s Goth N’ Lovely
romance Spinsterella. And this was
one of the toughest novels I ever had to write.
What made
Spellbound a challenge to write were the three elements I was working with.
First, the book was a historical novel set during 1989. So I had to do a LOT of
research to make sure that many of the historical details were correct. Even
though I was 16 in 1989, I couldn’t go on my just my memory alone. In order for
the reader to get a clear picture of what life was like during that time I had
to make sure that I confirmed everything from movie releases to comic book
releases with dates.
To write most of
the story I had to get my mind in a “1989” mode. During that time there were no
smartphones, laptops, or tablets. Heck, there was no internet as we know it. Most
People read paperback books, used corded phones, listened to music on cassettes
they played in walkmans. They watched movies on videotapes they rented at the
video store, and most homes only had one color TV and VCR in the living room
which EVERYONE watched.
And the family
structure was completely different too. Most families at that time ate together
and spent time together in the mornings and the evenings. Work wasn’t a 14-16
hour day back then. Parents worked maybe 8-10 hours back then and were home to
spend time with their children. So there were actual meals at the dinner table
and discussions around it.
It was a different
world than many growing up today would even know about.
Second, I was
exploring African-American culture. African-American culture was also very
different back then as well. With the crack epidemic ravaging Black
neighborhoods and dividing Black families, most Black people were living in
fear of dope dealers, crackheads, and the cops.
Most clean-cut Black
kids like Matilda who went to public school lived in fear of dope dealers who
prowled the halls. And girls like Matilda lived in fear of the hood chicks who
stood at their sides. With teachers and administrators being apathetic and
school security not giving a shit, these urban terrorists bullied everyone into
conforming to their cultural standard. Those who dared to be themselves had to
deal with violence and threats of violence.
Thanks to these
forces many brothers and sisters grew up believing there was only one way to be
“Black”. And that anyone who wanted to do things like read comics, be into
computers or subcultures like Goth were weird or “acting white”. Some even
believed that Black people who were into these things were sellouts looking to
betray their race. Black folks talked a lot about diversity, but there was no
diversity promoted within the Black community. Most Black people wanted to fit
into a standard of “Blackness” that was acceptable to White people.
That’s the spell I
believe many are under. And the dark magic that keeps Black culture in a
dysfunctional state.
Third I was
exploring the Goth Subculture. And that was also totally different then than it
was now. Back in 1989 Hot Topic was just a small shop in Los Angeles. And there
were no Goth fashion designers like Killstar, Dark & Love, and Jawbreaker to
make clothes specifically for Goth tastes. Heck, you couldn’t even get a corset
anywhere at retail but Fredrick’s of Hollywood!
Moreover, there
were no Goth shops like Queen of Darkness, or Goth makeup brands like Kat Von D
or Jeffree Star that created products specifically for Goths. There was no Pinky
Paradise or Sclera who made vampy contacts, or Demonia or New Rock to
manufacture Goth boots. All that stuff became available in the 1990’s and the
21st Century.
Goths back in 1989
New York had to buy their clothes at thrift stores and vintage shops in places
like The Village and Union Square, and their fashion staples like fishnet
stockings and tops in places like Chinatown and Alphabet City. There was no
eBay and there was no amazon.com. Again, there was no internets to buy Goth
gear!
People had to make their own Goth looks
up by buying vintage clothes and customizing them to their tastes. A sewing
machine was a staple for many Goths who could afford it, or really good skills
with scissors, needles and thread.
For makeup a Goth
had to use what everyone else used. If you were lucky you could find a Black
lipstick or a dark red at the counter at the department store or in the
drugstore. So people had to be creative because Sephora didn’t exist!
And if you wanted
stuff spiked collars and studded collars and cuffs you had to go to the pet
store. That was the only place you could buy them.
And you just
couldn’t walk into a Wiz and buy some Goth music like Sisters of Mercy and
Siouxsie and the Banshees. All they stocked was top 40. No, to get you Siouxsie
tapes or your Sisters of Mercy, you had to go to a record shop like Colony in
Times Square or a record shop in The Village and pray they had it in stock.
Yep, Death Rock or Goth Rock was that obscure and THAT hard to find. If you
were lucky you could catch a music video of your favorite Goth band on U68 or
MTV. They popped up now and again in between the Paula Abduls, Michael
Jacksons, Janet Jacksons and top 40 acts.
Ah, MTV in 1989. A
time when that channel actually played music videos 99 percent of the time.
These poor kids don’t know what they’re missing.
And while there was
no Nightmare before Christmas for Goths to make their staple movie, this was
the golden age of horror movies. There was practically one being released every
week in 1989. And if you could find a nice rundown theater like the Kent in the
South Bronx you could really sit back and enjoy them for a Saturday Matinee. The
soon to be Goth CLASSIC Beetlejuice was on VHS and the blockbuster Batman was
the most popular film of the year.
The dark period of
New York with crackheads, rundown buildings, abandoned lots and over 2,000
murders is a setting that contrasts the dark and spooky world of the Goth
Subculture Matilda is about to enter. I wanted to show how the real horrors
around her in Black culture were more terrifying than her journey into the darkness
in the Goth subculture.
With the first
draft of Spellbound done, I’m starting work on edits. I’m shooting for a 2017
release. For the meantime, pick up a copy of Spinsterella on Amazon,
Smashwords, iBookstore, and Nook!
Friday, June 17, 2016
Johnson Family Sells Ebony & Jet and SELLS OUT the Black Community
John H. Johnson is
spinning in his grave right now.
Yesterday, Johnson
Publications was sold to a Texas investment firm for an “undisclosed sum”. A
complete and utter travesty.
Why is this a
travesty? The Johnson family didn’t value the publishing institution that their
patriarch established. Institutions critical to history are supposed to be
protected and preserved. Unfortunately, most Black folks are so desperate for
riches they’ll sell a wealth of intangibles far more valuable in exchange for
it such as their history, their culture, and their legacy.
And the sale of
Johnson publications shows how little value Black folks place protecting their
legacies. John H. Johnson provided a place for Black people to have magazines that
featured their image in a time when there were no magazines presenting the
Black image, the Black experience and Black culture. Sadly because Black people
never teach their children to value themselves, their culture and their
cultural institutions, the next generation of Black folks won’t have a venue to
present their views of Black culture to the world.
And in this age of
Big six media (SONY, Warner Brothers, Disney, Viacom Comcast, Newscorp) it’s
paramount that Black media remain independent from mainstream media. The Big
six have no interest in presenting balance images of Blacks in their media. So
we have to protect and preserve the media institutions we own while building
new ones to present a counterpoint to mainstream media and the stereotypes they
want to present as a standard “Black” image.
It’s clear to me
that someone in the Johnson family FAILED to teach their children and
children’s children the value of the assets they were blessed with. And because
they weren’t taught to value the assets their parents provided to them they
didn’t take time to preserve the institution not only for themselves but the
Black community as well.
The sale of Johsnon
Publications shows the world how little Black people value wealth. There was a
wealth of information amassed by John H. Johnson’s family and it was those
fixed tangible assets of publications, photo archives interviews and articles
that allowed them to have something valuable to pass down from one generation
to the next.
It’s also clear to
me that the current generation of the Johnson family clearly doesn’t understand
the value of what past generations have given them. Magazines like Ebony and
Jet were how Black people controlled their image. How Black people presented
themselves to the world.
The printing press
is a powerful thing. The media created on it can shape the way Black people are
viewed for generations. An image in a magazine can tell a story to people all
over the world regarding Black culture and even define a period in Black
history. John H. Johnson understood this. Sadly his children and grandchildren
and the children of those generations of children and grandchildren take the
images their patriarch fought so hard to create in Black magazines like Ebony
and Jet for granted.
What they don’t
understand is before Johnson Publications went into business, there were no
Black magazines. And during that era the image of Black people was presented in
a negative light. Most of the depictions of Blacks in White-owned media like
books and magazines before 1945 often presented Black people as lazy shiftless
coons, Black Brutes who committed horrible crimes and Mammies Jezebels, and
Tragic Mulattoes.
And stories of
brutal crimes against Black people like the burning of towns like Rosewood and
Black Wall Street were kept out of the mainstream White-owned newspapers. If it
weren’t for Black newspapers reporting the news most wouldn’t know about the
numerous lynchings that went on regularly in the south.
John H. Johnson
tried provided balance of the Black image with his publications. Unfortunately
his heirs couldn’t understand why we needed that balance. Over the last few
years they’ve mismanaged Ebony and Jet and squandered their inheritance by
presenting a picture of Black life in their publications that is equal to the
racist caricatures that Johnson fought against.
Some will say Ebony
is “safe” because it was sold to a so-called Black-owned company but what they
fail to understand is when it comes to the Black image it’s not about selling
the magazine to a Black person, but the RIGHT Black person. Having the image of
Blacks controlled by an incompetent person like Tyler Perry or a self-hating
person with a sinister agenda like Lee Daniels can lead to generations of Black
people to see themselves in a distorted way.
We know NOTHING
about this so-called Black owned company who Johnson Publications was sold to.
We know nothing about their views regarding the Black image or Black media. We
know nothing about their long-term vision for presenting the Black image in
media. The Black folks at Johnson sold their publishing business based on a
promise from that investment firm that they’d keep some jobs and run it like
Johnson used to.
A penny wise and
pound-foolish business move. And a dangerous one in the long-term scheme of
things.
Yeah some Black
folks about keep jobs at the new Ebony media. But no one of today’s generation
understands how important it is OWN SOMETHING.
That’s the sad
lesson that wasn’t imparted to John H. Johnson’s descendants regarding the
presses of Johnson publications. In publishing the OWNER dictates the viewpoint
of the media presented on that platform, not the employees. And if that owner
decides they want to change the view of that magazine or publications they may
do so. The person who controls the dollars controls the viewpoints in the
media. Everyone else works for them. And they can be hired or fired based on
the publisher’s whims.
As a publisher
myself I understand the power of OWNERSHIP. My dollars as limited as they are
control the viewpoint in SJS DIRECT publications. I understand the value of
presenting balanced images of Black life to readers. And the responsibility I
have to publish the RIGHT publications for Black readers.
That’s the lesson I
took from John H. Johnson when I was a teenager. Sadly his children never
learned it.
The press is a
powerful thing. With the press a publisher controls the image of
African-Americans in society. That press can shape the way Black people are
viewed to millions. It can tell the stories about Black life mainstream media
doesn’t tell, and present viewpoints that most wouldn’t know about. Control
over that counterpoint in media is something that should never be relinquished.
The Johnson family has no idea what it has sold away from the Black community
for thirty shekels of silver.
Wednesday, June 15, 2016
The Man Who Rules The World Easter Eggs & Fun Facts
The Man Who Rulesthe World is the sequel to 2011’s The Temptation of John Haynes. And it took
close to five years to write 120 pages. Originally The Man Who Rules The World
was supposed to be written back as far as 2010. Back then it was planned to be
a 400 page novel. Unfortunately, I couldn’t get past the first three chapters. The
villain just didn’t work.
I got inspired to
write The Man Who Rules The World when my mother was sick in the hospital with
pneumonia in August of 2015. I wasn’t really in a writing mood due to my
mother’s illness and the family issues around it. But I decided to give into
inspiration and finished the first draft of the story in less than a week.
The Title The Man
Who Rules The World is inspired by something pro wrestler Sid Vicious used to
say in his promos around 1999-2000 when he was in a feud with Goldberg. During
that time he called himself The Man Who Rules The World. I thought that title
would fit the story detailing John’s growth as a leader and CEO of an
international corporation.
The cover for The
Man Who Rules The World was actually a last minute thing. Originally I planned
for Hero Business artist Bill Walko to design the cover for the book.
Unfortunately, when the Kickstarter for this years’ books didn’t get funded, I
was forced to design the cover myself. Originally I wanted the cover to feature
a John posed like Superman was on the cover of All-Star Superman #10. I felt
the image showed his power and authority, but also showed his compassion and
kindness.
Unfortunately, due
to budget reasons I had to get creative. With limited resources I opted to make
The Man Who Rules the World look like a Time Magazine cover. The picture comes
from a photo of a custom John Haynes action figure I made a few years ago. With
a little Photoshop magic I was able to make a cover that caught readers’
attention.
Continuity wise in
the SJS DIRECT Universe the events in The Man Who Rules The World takes place
right after Isis: Bride of Dracula.
The Man Who Rules
The World can be considered the second “event type” story in the SJS DIRECT
Universe. The first was Isis: Wrath of the Cybergoddess in 2014. In that story
Isis met John Haynes for the first time.
The build for this
sequel to The Temptation of John Haynes was planned four years ago. John
Haynes’ mention in early Isis series books, appearances E’steem series books and
major role in Isis: Night of the Vampires, E’steem: Undercover and Isis: Brideof Dracula were actually all leading up to the characters’ eventual return to a
solo story. I just wanted the right tale to tell so that the buildup would payoff
BIG for readers.
While the The Man
Who Rules The World is just 120 pages, it’s a BIG story and feels like an epic.
Almost every major character in the SJS DIRECT Universe practically makes an
appearance in The Man Who Rules The World. Readers who have been following all
the books I’ve published since 2002 will be able to make a note of Who’s who in
the SJS DIRECT Universe.
God Katious was not
the original villain planned for Man Who Rules The World. I planned on saving
him for what was to be the final SJS DIRECT story. The original villain I planned
for The Man Who Rules The World was The Block who was featured in the first
chapter. Again, the story just didn’t work out. Block was too small scale a bad
guy for a story titled The Man Who Rules The World.
God Katious was
originally the character MastiKatious from my tall tale The Saga of
MastiKatious. The Saga of MastiKatious tells the tale of Katia, a prosperous
and powerful ancient African Kingdom that was destroyed by Osiris and the
Heliopolitan gods before Egypt became a nation.
The Character of
God Katious is actually inspired by actor Tony Todd. Whenever I wrote Katious’
narration and dialogue I always heard Tony Todd’s voice as God Katious.
God Katious is a
name inspired by Japanese Manga and anime. Incredibly powerful Manga characters
are often called God anime and Manga. Such as God Magnus in Transformers:
Robots in disguise God Phoenix in Gatcahman or better known as Battle of the
Planets in America.
The Gem of
Omnipotence is inspired by Marvel’s Infinity Gauntlet. Like the Infinity Gems,
the Gem is incredibly powerful. However, like the Infinity Gems it has its
their limitations.
God Katious is
E’steem’s biological father. After the destruction of Katia Seth deemed E’steem
a “Child of the Gods” and due to this she was adopted by the Heliopolitan gods.
E’steem was raised by Osris and Queen Isis and considers Osiris to be her
father and Queen Isis to be her mother. Officially she’s a princess, but due to
her adoption into the Heliopolitan pantheon she’s a goddess in the technical
sense.
E’steem is inspired
by actress Salli Richardson-Whitfield. Whenever I write E’steem’s dialogue and
narration I always hear Salli’s voice as E’steem.
I always thought
Salli had the perfect voice for playing a Disney bad guy like Ursula or
Malefecent. And I wanted the E’steem character to be a perfect fit for Salli’s amazing
acting abilities.
The E’steem
Character is one part Salli Richardson, One part Morgan Le Fay. When I
originally created the character she was supposed to be an Egyptian version of
Morgan Le Fay, a powerful sorceress who helped Seth in his plans to overthrow
Osiris and was aspiring to get power as the first Lady of Hell by killing Isis
in the first Isis published back in 2002.
However, the
character has evolved over the last 15 or so years. Since The Temptation of
John Haynes and the E’steem series she has become one of SJS DIRECT’s most
popular heroines, right behind Nikki Desmond of All About Nikki and Colleen
Anderson of The Thetas.
The E’steem
character starts moving forward in the character transformation arc started in
The Temptation of John Haynes and building throughout the E’steem series.
E’steem’s storyline in Man Who Rules The World leads into a major turning point
for the character in E’steem: The Witches of Eastland and a climaxes in next
years’ E’steem: Ascension.
John’s
ex-girlfriend Colleen returns to make an appearance in The Man Who Rules The
World. She’s also the main character in the popular 2013 novel The Thetas.
The Colleen
character is actually inspired by actress Robin Givens. I got ideas for
creating the character in 1989 when she portrayed the daughter of a rich mogul
in the made for TV movie The Penthouse. Whenever I write Colleen she sounds
like actress Robin Givens.
Colleen returns to
the Goth roots in Man Who Rules The World I established for the character back
in 1989. That’s why she sports a pair of New Rocks and has her black lipstick
on. That’s a HUGE contrast from the sophisticated way the character was
portrayed in 2013’s The Thetas where the character was softer and daintier.
Lucifer in The Man
Who Rules the World is inspired by actor Keith David. Whenever I hear Lucifer’s
voice it’s always Keith David in the narration and the dialogue. Just like in
Temptation Lucifer is in the background playing a game of chess manipulating
people like pawns and rooks in his efforts to destroy John.
Osiris is inspired
by actor Samuel L. Jackson. Every time I write Osiris’ dialogue I always hear
Samuel L. Jackson’s voice as the Pharaoh of Heliopolis. Osiris’ role is a big
one in Man Who Rules the World. He’s the god trying to protect his family from
the danger of being corrupted by Katious emotional and mental manipulations,
and preventing them from harming humanity in their attempt to protect mankind.
This is Osiris’
first major appearance in John Haynes’ universe. But it won’t be the last. He may pop up for another story.
Isis is a character
who has been around since 1999. And while the goddess next door has carried her
own book series, this is her fourth big event where she teams with John Haynes.
In the past she’s teamed up with John in Isis: Wrath of the Cybergoddess, Isis:
Night of the Vampires and Isis: Bride of Dracula.
I’ve gotten
inspiration for Isis’ character from different sources over the years, but
these days I pull some inspiration for Isis’ voice and look from actress Tia
Mowry. Whenever I write the character these days she sounds like Tia Mowry
doing a Batman Beyond Imitation.
John Haynes himself
is a character based on myself. However, over the last few years the character
has been evolving. Currently I kind of see him as a fusion of myself, Marvel’s
Beast and TV’s Perry Mason. Some people say he reminds them of Rupert Giles
from Buffy.
As I’ve studied
men’s issues over the last seven years I’ve made efforts to make the John
Haynes character more masculine, assertive, and have more alpha male qualities.
Over the course of books like Isis: Wrath of the Cybergoddess, Isis: Night of
the Vampires and Isis: Bride of Dracula he’s become a more heroic character who
confidently can take on the greatest of challenges.
I chose the setting
of Times Square as a setting for several chapters in Man Who Rules The World
because Time Square in New York is considered the crossroads of the world. The
way I saw it, it was the best place for a final battle where the fate of the
world was in the balance.
In one chapter John
makes a joke referencing a Hellmouth in California. That is a direct reference
to the Hellmouth under Sunnydale California where Buffy The Vampire Slayer used
to live. Some of the humor and dialogue style in John Haynes stories is
inspired by Joss Whedon’s Buffy The Vampire Slayer and 1984’s Ghostbusters.
A scene of John and
Colleen’s scene on the balcony in Man Who Rules The World is inspired by my
memories of looking out the window of my apartment on 9/11. During that day I
remember the skies being so quiet and it being surreal. And I wanted to capture
that sense of surrealness in that scene.
The newscasts
mentioning the End of the World on ABC News and Armageddon NOW on CNN reference
a joke I used to make around the dinner table regarding what the news media
would be like when the Biblical Last days happened. The way I see it, it’d be a
circus. And online social media would be completely insane.
The red Buick John
drives on the way to confront God Katious is actually based on the 1976 Buick
Limited my father used to own for over 20 years. I remember sitting in the shotgun
seat many times when he’d take me to Harlem to get haircuts. I never got to
drive it, but always wanted to, so I decided to write about it. And yes, it
STILL had the 8-track tape player in it the last time I saw it in 1996!
In the Times Square
confrontation with John, Katious makes a defiant statement that mocks something
Jesus said regarding a man having faith strong enough to cast a mountain into
the sea.
The final fate of
the villain is references something Jesus stated being the stone that the
builders refused and becoming the head of corner. In the Temptation of John
Haynes E’steem fell on the stone and was broken. And in Man Who Rules the World
God Katious was supposed to be the villain who the stone fell upon and was
ground to powder.
When I imagined The
Man Who Rules the World I saw it like a big budget action movie in my head. I
wanted it to be like the SJS DIRECT version of The Avengers or Captain America:
Civil War, a large-scale story that featured John leading all the heroes of the
SJS DIRECT Universe during a crisis. African-Americans don’t get featured in
these kinds of stories, and rarely do readers get a chance to see a Black male hero
leading during a crisis where Black people save the world. I believe that makes
The Man Who Rules The World Unique and distinct, the chance to see Black people
working together to fight to save the world.
Reception to The
Man Who Rules The World has been strong. Readers have been picking it up and sharing
it. If reception to John Haynes stories remains strong I may have to start a
John Haynes series. No promises.
You can pick up The
Man Who Rules the World in paperback, Kindle, Smashwords Nook, or the
iBookstore!
Monday, June 13, 2016
SJS DIRECT TITLES YOU MAY HAVE MISSED
Working Hard on finishing up Spellbound so here's an video talking about books you may have missed from SJS DIRECT. Pick em up today!
Friday, June 10, 2016
Wednesday, June 8, 2016
The Challenge of Writing Superheroines
When it comes to
supeheroes most comic book writers can tell a great story. However when it
comes to superheroines oftentimes they struggle.
One of the reasons
many comics featuring superheroines struggle is because a lot of comic book
writers make the mistake of believing that they can write heroines just like
the heroes. Why doesn’t this work? Because Men and women apply completely
different approaches to life. And a story model that works for a male hero just
won’t tell a compelling story with female heroine.
In most superhero
stories the focus is primarily on the character and the action and adventure
they’re involved in. And that works primarily because men are logical. What
motivates a male character to move a story forward is primarily external,
focusing primarily on solving the problem and HOW they use their powers,
gadgets and abilities to catch the bad guy or stop the menace out to destroy
the world.
However, a story
featuring a heroine a writer has to use a different story approach. Why?
Because women are emotional. And the primary focus in a heroines’ story isn’t
actually her powers, gadgets, or abilities. What moves a story forward with a
heroine relate to her internal character traits, focusing on things like her
core values, and the beliefs related to her mission. It’s not about what power she
uses to beats the villain, it’s primarily about WHY she wants to beat her.
In addition what
also drives a story with a heroine are the relationships she has with the
villain or her relationships with supporting cast members. In women’s fiction
and romance novels it’s the interpersonal relationships the heroine has with
the love interest, friends, and antagonist that makes the story compelling to
readers. Unfortunately, there’s next to no focus on internal character traits
or interpersonal relationships in comics featuring superheroines. And due to
that lack of focus on these core story elements, there’s no chemistry for a
compelling read featuring a superheroine.
Due to the lack of
focus on internal character traits, most comics with superheroines in the lead fall
flat. Without that strong internal characterization there’s no personality or
“voice” that speaks to the reader. And without those internal character traits to
stimulate the readers’ emotions there’s no for the reader to connect with the
character and identify with them, their mission or the values they stand for.
And due to the lack
of focus on interpersonal relationships between the heroine and her villains there’s
no chemistry to create around their stories. What drives a superheroines’ story
is based on the emotions the characters feel about each other. The heroine has
to HATE that BITCH enough to want to KICK HER ASS, and the villainess has to
HATE that BITCH enough to KILL her.
A catfight between
two heroines may sell a comic or two. But a catfight between a heroine and a
villainess who HATE each other will sell MILIONS. Most comic book writers don’t
understand how to build that kind of heat with their superheroines.
The biggest problem
with comics featuring superheroines is that writers rarely give readers a
reason WHY they need to read her adventures. Superheroine adventures are
interesting from a technical standpoint, but rarely compelling from an
emotional one. There haven’t been many comics featuring a relationship between
the heroine and her villain that got really intense. That got PERSONAL. That
gave the reader a reason to CARE. That gives them an incentive to buy the next
issue. That gave them a reason to tell their friends to pick it up.
In 75 years comic
readers haven’t really gotten a rivalry like Xena/Callisto Buffy/Dark Willow or
Mickie James/Trish Stratus. And it’s a shame. Because if a feud got that
INTENSE and that PERSONAL people would have a reason to pick up comics
featuring superheroines and tell their friends about them.
Plain and simple, a
feud between heroines has to get PERSONAL. When it’s PERSONAL it stimulates the
readers’ emotions. Readers see the challenge to the heroine has maintaining her
morals and core values in the face of the emotional obstacles the villainess is
placing in front of her and are compelled to see how she overcomes the
challenge to her beliefs and ideals.
That makes the
reader understand WHY she needs to beat her villains.
As a writer of
strong multidimensional heroines in everything from fantasy fiction like the
Isis series to screenplays like All About Marilyn and All About Nikki and YA
fiction like The Thetas and romances like A Recipe for $ucce$$ and
Spinsterella, I know for a fact that the story model for writing heroine is
completely different than the one applied for a male hero. And a writer has to
be able to apply the right approach to storytelling if they hope to create
compelling stories featuring superheroines. If a writer is focuses more on the internal
characterizations of their heroines than their external appearance they could
create comics that would have readers anticipating the next issue of a
heroines’ adventures month after month and telling their friends to pick up
their adventures.
Monday, June 6, 2016
Fun With The World's Finest
Still busy working on Spinsterella's Prequel Spellbound, so here's an improve comic strip for the interim. Bruce isn't always right!
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